Question # 1 Solution
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18 May 2010
Project Manager of Jhelum
Dear Project Manager,
I am a engineer and i was shifted to Jhelum.
I have the family and i want to buy a new home in Jhelum. I see your banner in sadder bazaar. I have really impressed from your advertisements that you say about the town facilities. So now i want to know about your home. So please tell me whether you have the facility of water, gas, and electricity in your house or not and also tell me the security of the town and so on......
I will be very thankful to you on this act of kindness. Please contact me at the following numbers.
Question # 2 Solution
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